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Well told! I love the cadence, and I like the way you show instead of tell. I’d like to see a more robust ending or more of a wrap up or just to keep reading a little. (found a bug. An error message said my response must be fewer than 10,000 words because it was counting your entire story that...

(Children's story - illustrations would show these fluffy main characters but only show the sandaled feet of the people in the story.) Pappa Rabbit and Baby Bunny (BB for short) were munching grass near the big rocks and BB said, "Pappa, PLEASE can I go in the cave? Please, please, please...